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a love poem

Sun Sep 30, 2007, 1:47 PM
It just came to me so I had to write it down.



I love you,
I need you to set me free.


I am afraid are you?
I stumble, you let me fall into your arms,
I hand you the key,
I get lost in my cage of confusion.


The doors are wide open and you fling the key away.
You walk in to find,
I am submerged in layers,
Half-contious laying on my side,
You gently turn me on my back.
You stroke me your hands like feathers,
Make the stone layers crumble away.


So that all that's left is the last layer that traps me.
My clothing covered with wet clay,
That you peel away,
revealing my pathway out.

You kiss me and out spills my soul
Opening the floodgates.
My feelings awaken as my heart gives a small cry
The passion consumes me,
All goes dark and as the passion flows
Between us breaking the cage.


Through your fear you whisper to me "I love you."
The only things I could say were
"I love YOU, you set me free.




I dedicate this to my love Dakotah

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...allehz....u made me cry.... this is such a beutiful piece... it makes my heart heavy as i suddenly miss you...


u should submit it to literature so it goes to your gallery and is up for favs...

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miss you too.
btw how do you submit it to literature tried to find how to but was unsuccessful.

glad ya read it. It has sturing strong feelings and a connection I will always have for you.

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